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naruto banner mangashare by mangalori naruto banner mangashare by mangalori
for mangashare contest.

not finished yet, comment will come later.
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Amarevia Aug 13, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, I still don't know what to say about this...
*thinking thinking thinking*
Well, if you want advanced critique:
I like the poses. Especially Naruto and Konohamaru. Sakura's hand is kinda awkward, but I have no clue how it could be corrected. ^^;
Is the shading on their skin finished? I think you could blend it some more and add more shades. Or if you want a cel shading-ish look, use less shades and don't blend!
Your lines look great, but sorta too plain. Have you ever heard of line weights? ;P

XD Sasuke is smexy with that ribbon in his hair. XD :giggle:
XD You recommented lol.
yup I'm proud of how naruto and konohamaru turned out. The rest is crap.

*cough* it should be finished yes 8D I suck I know, especially sasuke's skin. I think naru and kono turned out better, not great but ok no?

I'm not sure what I want lol... But I don't think I want cellshading... I'm thinking of using your technique to help the shades blend better and have my way with the smudge tool afterwards. But I don't feel like redoing this one :B I got bored with it.
I'll do another digital sometime... maybe...

XD He is supposed to be a chrismas present lol
naru is santa, kono is a santa elf thing, kakashi is Rudolph, sakura is a christmas babe and sasu is her very own present (on a leash for safety matters)
Amarevia Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep! 8D

Oh, then use darker shades! And lighter ones too. You may use even black and white at a very low opacity. It's too plain that way. I can tell you spent most of the time with Naru and Kono, though.
Okay, then you must know how I feel about finishing that drawing I used in the tutorial. I got bored with it. =P

:XD: I see. Poor Christmas present Sasuke...
yeah I tried the black and white thing a while ago but I think colours work better. Otherwhise the lighting will look off.
XD yeah I know how you feel... I'll try my best for the next one ok? And I'll use your advice.

Rape on christmass eve :XD:
Amarevia Aug 16, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think I know how lighting is supposed to look, lol. I'm just following my random intuitions most of the time. :D
Oh, alright.

"Rape on christmass eve" LOL! *is randomly reminded of a Royai picture of Riza in a santa outfit topping Roy and imagines the same scene with Sakura and Sasuke* XDDD
me too.. bit if you try things out you can see what the effect is no? :D

XD I wanna see that one!
Amarevia Aug 17, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess you're right. :D

[link] :D
:XD: Riza is on top but... seeing their expressions it looks as if Roy is the one on top XD
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Amarevia Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great! :XD:
waaaaaaaai! :XD: *glomps yous* :glomp:
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