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Amarevia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, I still don't know what to say about this...
*thinking thinking thinking*
Well, if you want advanced critique:
I like the poses. Especially Naruto and Konohamaru. Sakura's hand is kinda awkward, but I have no clue how it could be corrected. ^^;
Is the shading on their skin finished? I think you could blend it some more and add more shades. Or if you want a cel shading-ish look, use less shades and don't blend!
Your lines look great, but sorta too plain. Have you ever heard of line weights? ;P

XD Sasuke is smexy with that ribbon in his hair. XD :giggle:
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mangalori Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
XD You recommented lol.
yup I'm proud of how naruto and konohamaru turned out. The rest is crap.

*cough* it should be finished yes 8D I suck I know, especially sasuke's skin. I think naru and kono turned out better, not great but ok no?

I'm not sure what I want lol... But I don't think I want cellshading... I'm thinking of using your technique to help the shades blend better and have my way with the smudge tool afterwards. But I don't feel like redoing this one :B I got bored with it.
I'll do another digital sometime... maybe...

XD He is supposed to be a chrismas present lol
naru is santa, kono is a santa elf thing, kakashi is Rudolph, sakura is a christmas babe and sasu is her very own present (on a leash for safety matters)
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep! 8D

Oh, then use darker shades! And lighter ones too. You may use even black and white at a very low opacity. It's too plain that way. I can tell you spent most of the time with Naru and Kono, though.
Okay, then you must know how I feel about finishing that drawing I used in the tutorial. I got bored with it. =P

:XD: I see. Poor Christmas present Sasuke...
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mangalori Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
yeah I tried the black and white thing a while ago but I think colours work better. Otherwhise the lighting will look off.
XD yeah I know how you feel... I'll try my best for the next one ok? And I'll use your advice.

Rape on christmass eve :XD:
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think I know how lighting is supposed to look, lol. I'm just following my random intuitions most of the time. :D
Oh, alright.

"Rape on christmass eve" LOL! *is randomly reminded of a Royai picture of Riza in a santa outfit topping Roy and imagines the same scene with Sakura and Sasuke* XDDD
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mangalori Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008
me too.. bit if you try things out you can see what the effect is no? :D

XD I wanna see that one!
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess you're right. :D

[link] :D
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mangalori Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2008
:XD: Riza is on top but... seeing their expressions it looks as if Roy is the one on top XD
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great! :XD:
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
waaaaaaaai! :XD: *glomps yous* :glomp:
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:glomp:
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
*jumps you and squashes you*
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Amarevia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X___x *is squashed*
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
oh noes D: *scrapes you of the floor*
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AmyGuardia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Professional Filmographer
hey cool pic XD kakashi is the deer!!!forgot the deers name but he;s cute XD so are the others
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
Rudloph! that's correct! XD it's the one with the bright red nose! :nod:
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AmyGuardia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Professional Filmographer
aaaaahh yesh how could i forget Rudolph XD
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
XD
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BrokenDeathAngel Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehehe.Poor Sasuke. He doesn't seem happy to be leashed by Sakura. I love the background. :D
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
X___x now I feel bad... I ripped the backround of the net.
you no like the rest of it? D:
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BrokenDeathAngel Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohhh...hehehe.... shhhh....what people don't know..won't hurt em. XD

I like it. Cause Sasuke is wearing a leash. HU-HAH! XD
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
knew you would like that part you devil XD but the fact that sakura is holding it won't be much to yer liking right? something tells me you would have preferred itachi on the other end :XD:

btw you know what sasuke is supposed to be? a chrismas present XD that's where the ribbons are for!

oh yeah! I turned 18 ya know! OwO I got the kewlest present ever! a wacom tablet! it's the small version of the "bamboo fun", the software I got with it contained photoshop elements 5 and artrage 2! :dance: I'm so happy!
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BrokenDeathAngel Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Waiiiiiiiiiiiiii~!!!! Happy Birthday!! :D How does it feel? Being 18? Lol. XD WOW!! So cool! You got a tablet. Wish I could have a tablet as a B-day pressie. Anyways, hope all ur Bday wishes come true Lori-chan! :hug:
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mangalori Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
yay! thanks! :hug:
how does it feel? unnn... not so very diffenent than being 17 really. I mean I don't have money for a car so the driving part is not for me lol. the pressie was nice though XD tablet tablet tablet!
you don't have one yet right? don't worry there are still cheap ones for sale too! ^^ they're good as well. but the bamboo fun is just too flashy *w* it's awesome!
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